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Breaking Travis The West Series Book 5 edition by Jill Sanders Literature Fiction eBooks

I've read all the previous West Series books and was hoping that Travis' redemption would also better my opinion on the series. Unfortunately, it hasn't.
It starts of strong, the writing is better and not as clichéd and the dialogues not as unnatural as in Missy's Moment, yet halfway through start the issues with dialogues that are missing quotation marks, parragraphs that are incorrectly indented, dialogues that are between two people that are on the same parragraph, wrong grammar use, chapters that don't have the page break and start in the middle of the page, dialogue that doesn't seem to remember who says what... Again, while the characters are interesting (Travis' change is good, feels natural, and his inner turmoil is the basis for the story, and he's compelling and developed), the lack of editing again stops me from rating the story higher. And regarding Holly, I'm confused because throughout the story she's been all her life in Fairplay, she grew up nearby, she spent her summers there, she was friends with Haley her whole life, she doesn't remember Travis or never interacted with him when they were younger, she remembers him perfectly... either she's got a bad memory or Jill Sanders isn't sure of how Holly's youth was.
The new characters presented are interesting, and I'll say I'll keep on reading the series because I already bought the bundle.


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Breaking Travis The West Series Book 5 edition by Jill Sanders Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews

This entire series has been amazing. Not one bad book in the lot. Can't wait for #6!!! A true keeper and a must read.
Great series. This book is one of the last in the series so be sure to read them in order. Each book will capture your heart and leave wishing for more.
I continue to enjoy all the books in this series. I also find that the editing seems to have improved. Regardless, I shall read on happily.
The right amount of everything in each West Series book. Romance, humor good characters, story line and just a good amount of steam. Love all the books in this series.
I really appreciate the style of writing by Jill Sanders. Her characters are so real and you just have to fall in love. The story here is that you never succeed in running from trouble!! This is a really great series and I highly recommend it!!
In this book Holly runs the book store. Her godfather is helping her renovate the building including her apartment. His son is one of the town's bad boys. There are many interesting twists and turns to the plot which lead to a happy ending..
We met Travis in Alex’s story, Taming Alex. He was her on again, off again boyfriend, the town bad boy whose parents always bailed him out of everything that he was accused of. He left shortly after his mother shot Grant, Alex’s fiancé, and never looked back. He got himself cleaned up and swore that he would never be that man again. Now four years later, his mother is in a mental institution and his father has passed away He’s determined that he is going to sell of his father’s assets and leave Fairplay for good but his father had other plans. The stipulation in his will states that Travis must finish the projects that he started otherwise he will be left with nothing. This wasn’t in Travis’ plans but he jumps in and starts helping because the sooner that the projects are completed, the sooner he can leave. He hadn’t counted on the feisty little redhead that has one hell of a right hook though.

Another great book by Jill Sanders! I wasn’t a fan of Travis before but I had a feeling that he had a good heart but had a lot of growing up to do. After all when you have a mom that believes that you can do no wrong even though you have proven time and time again that you need discipline, things are bound to go wrong. I really liked Travis in this book though. Sober Travis is a lot more appealing than drunk, stoned Travis. As for Holly, well she won my heart when she broke Savannah’s nose in Missy’s Moment. You can’t help but love anyone that puts that woman in her place. I can’t wait to read Roping Ryan which will be coming out soon.

Please note that each of these books can be read as a standalone but since it is a series about a small town, it’s so much more enjoyable you start at the beginning. The first book of the series is Loving Lauren and is only $2.99 on .
I've read all the previous West Series books and was hoping that Travis' redemption would also better my opinion on the series. Unfortunately, it hasn't.
It starts of strong, the writing is better and not as clichéd and the dialogues not as unnatural as in Missy's Moment, yet halfway through start the issues with dialogues that are missing quotation marks, parragraphs that are incorrectly indented, dialogues that are between two people that are on the same parragraph, wrong grammar use, chapters that don't have the page break and start in the middle of the page, dialogue that doesn't seem to remember who says what... Again, while the characters are interesting (Travis' change is good, feels natural, and his inner turmoil is the basis for the story, and he's compelling and developed), the lack of editing again stops me from rating the story higher. And regarding Holly, I'm confused because throughout the story she's been all her life in Fairplay, she grew up nearby, she spent her summers there, she was friends with Haley her whole life, she doesn't remember Travis or never interacted with him when they were younger, she remembers him perfectly... either she's got a bad memory or Jill Sanders isn't sure of how Holly's youth was.
The new characters presented are interesting, and I'll say I'll keep on reading the series because I already bought the bundle.